Sunday, June 18, 2023

Limerick's For Bri (Edwards) Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's this old fella called Bri,
He's an antagonising guy,
He's as sharp as they come,
Words roll off his tongue,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

Unnikrishnan, D.N., and Jayne, HAVE I 'SAID' ENOUGH HERE? ? ? I COULD write more. : )))))

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

I 'went looking' for a poem from Jayne's gentle hands, and just 'happened upon' this one. Lucky me. Lucky Jayne! Actually not ALL of my showcased poems 'rhyme'. 5 stars. : )

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

P.S. More than words roll off my tongue some days. You probably wouldn't like seeing it. MAYBE stanza 3 is my favorite/favourite and most honest! ! ! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

**** 3 (?) definitions for 'fly the coop': 'fly the coop verb To depart hastily or unannounced; to escape or flee. To escape from a pen or similar enclosure. Flee; take to one's heels; cut and run.

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

I'm done! I mean: With READING your poem, Jayne. DON'T get your hopes up (too high) that I, Bri, will soon FLY the coop **** of this FREE poetry site! ! !

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

'Poem', 'going', 'know it'? ? ? ? Jayne! , you did THAT on purpose, DIDN'T you? ! Nice. Actually, today my fingers are fumbling as I type and I hope I can use THAT as one excuse for any typos which YOU find. : )

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

I guess I'd BETTER FINISH READING this 'page-turner'. After all, I think I've not [YET] found anything to correct! !

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

OK, Jayne, I didn't KNOW that you 'cared so much for me'! ! [You'll get yours! .....[your comeuppance: ' A punishment or retribution that one deserves; one's just desserts.: '] bri : )

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These three Limericks read like a bribe to Bri Wordophile Edwards for selecting more of your poems for his future showcases… I'd try to believe it is not….

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

this gave me a GOOD laugh. Yes, I KNOW I failed to capitalize (capitalise-if-wish) the first word of this sentence. I, Bri, may break any (Ianguage) rule I wish to.

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D.N. Rebb 18 June 2023

No comment (wouldn't want to be dissected by yOU kNOW wHO)

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2023

HA HA...ha! This 'Robb comment' may EARN him a visit from You-Know-Who! ! : )

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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