Limericks,9,10, A Worm On My Back, A Naughty Boy Comments

Both limericks are beautiful, amusing and meaningful. Thank you madam for sharing this.

Magical two but in fact it's beauty of the poetess who described the two so nicely................10

I like that despite having different themes these poems relate to each other perfectly. It feels like going on a camping trip. These two things could be happening simultaneously and in the same place. They both have a very natural connectedness to them. The odd thing is the video/music that PH has supplied doesn't suit the tone of these lively, playful poems, such a shame! Regardless together or apart they are a joy to read. ~Nika

Limericks! Valsa, you write so beautifully, worm or child! You should write and publish nursery rhymes!

The duo magic of limerick all throughout the lines! Let this worm be on this naughty boy for a while... Ha ha ha..

Very insightful and wonderfully composed limericks..........Valsa.....hidden meaning so astounding.......great write ever...............

VALSA, i already knew you detest snails, but cute little old worms? ? ? ? ! i like this tale of woe. may all your worms fall from you and never return! but i'd rather have them on the outside than the inside, ....i think. thanks for sharing. ;) bri Some Say Cushioned Some say cushioned, some say fat.... when referring to on-what-the-boy-sat. Needless to say it's nice sometimes to have extra stuff..... when the trail's sloppy OR slopey and the going's tough.

Beautifully rhymed and interesting enjoyable read.

good rhyme...like it madam

yes, dear bard blessed, we the readers do feel all those expressions you drawn with wonderful words on us right the moment! the naughty one's fate too is hilarious, as someone jotted right. relieving in between the most engaging. true. rgds.

Beautiful and hilarious. These little interludes make writing and reading more interesting. Thank you.

excellent rhyme scheme, love the first one more.

Wonderful, I enjoyed both with deep meanings , thanks.