Limericks.4 And 5. On Not Eating, On Eating Comments

Both limericks are interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

Enjoyed both the Limericks.

To eat or not to eat that is the question. I really enjoyed this one. A tasty treat and a good laugh before the day begins. Very lovable and funny. Thank you Valsa.

valsa, i am confused. i copied the following and have pasted it below for you and other readers of these poems to comment on. [the poems 4 and 5 did not sound like limericks to me, though i found them quite interesting. i had a little trouble reading the first one as it seems to be missing some punctuation.] A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines. The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm. The third and fourth lines only have to have five to seven syllables, and have to rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm. :) bri

excellent Limericks! ! ! ! 10

Excellent Limericks...Beautiful way it is presented..Loved it.

I smiled quite a bit when I read this, I love the depth of imagination in this, great story and wonderful imagery, perhaps Mr. Watts should trade places?

Both the Limericks are hilarious- one on not eating and the other on eating- -both diaganolly opposite!

Beautiful Limericks kept me laughing. Eat and break the chair or not eat and kick the chair - up to the eater to decide! Thank you.

Your two Limericks did put a smile on my face Valsa.

Excellent limericks and your willingness to amuse us deserves to be applauded. A poet with virtual hold over the conservative devices of poetic justice ought to forget the past of his/her usual works and now and then go for such light submissions. A clear 10 for you Madam Valsa

excellent limerick. I enjoyed it very much nice break for the usual.

Light-heartedness gives us a break from the burden of worries and philosophies and it carries a message too.

Thank you Patricia.....! Your comment is almost like a funny limerick! !

Ha! Ha! Ha! , I like this one Valsa. To eat or not to eat that is the question. Thin and fat in front of the cat. Underfed as he lied on his bed. Fat as she sat and sat. I loved it!