Monday, June 23, 2014

Limericks,11,12 Love At First Sight, Love As It Runs Comments

Rating: 4.5

Limerick… Love at First Sight

A lad and lass, on first sight fell in love
They flew as they were a pair of dove
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2019

The first limerick about love and pressure is interesting and the second one is more interesting. Beautiful limericks with fun and humor amazingly shared. A 10

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Loke Kok Yee 02 November 2015

a pair of lovely limericks your poems are always a pleasure to read thanks Valsa-10++

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Savita Tyagi 14 July 2014

A very pleasant read. Enjoyed this light hearted poem very much.

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Amitava Sur 28 June 2014

Very nice Valsa - both of them satisfy the real theme of limerick.... enjoyed a lot

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 June 2014

Beautiful verses you have turned into a humorous ones.... Loved it......Smiles..

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2014

Valsa it's a different type poem from you, I really liked it.

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Tribhawan Kaul 25 June 2014

Both the limericks presents the humourous side of the poet. Second one is funnier than the first one. Enjoyed reading both. :) :) :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2014

Nice satirical verses. Hope love will have a better end sometimes.

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan 24 June 2014

A beautiful satire.. no words! would love to read more! :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 June 2014

love this simple take on satire on love turning burdensome.

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A sweet love poem aesthetically conceived.........Valsa........though a kind of humorous verse.............nicely composed indeed

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