Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Monday, June 13, 2016

Limerick: Young Man From Dakota Comments

Rating: 4.9

There was a young man from Dakota
Who moved to nearby Minnesota.
When asked, Is it better?
He said, Well, it's wetter,
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Kim Barney
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Lucifer 02 May 2021

This limerick is from early 20th century.

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Tom Billsborough 20 June 2016

A really good Limerick with an excellent rhythm. Don't know which is wetter but over here it's much wetter than thirty miles to the East! Sunny at the moment and even sunnier after reading your Limerick. Like the argument about your Geography too! Tom billsborough

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Wes Vogler 19 June 2016

A most excellent limerick more

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Kim Barney 19 June 2016

My apologies to my friend and fellow poet Hank Beuning, who was born in Minnesota. (And if I offended anyone else from Minnesota or elsewhere, I'm sorry. Just trying to make a rhyme.)

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Kelly Kurt 14 June 2016

Minnesota aint that far off from Either Dakota.: -) Fun limerick tho

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Kim Barney 15 June 2016

You are right, of course. It's right next door to both states. What was I thinking? Thanks, Kelly. I have changed it from far-off to nearby.

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Rajnish Manga 14 June 2016

Lovely poem- full of humour. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 15 June 2016

Thanks, Rajnish. I enjoyed writing it.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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