Sunday, March 12, 2017

Limerick- Writing Limericks Comments

Rating: 5.0

We become so foolish sometimes
In attempting to write funny rhymes
But they can misfire
Making the readers tire
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Loke Kok Yee 05 July 2017

You won't know till you have tried Now what great woe can betide? but yours always bring a smile And they last more than awhile Write! ! but with the rules abide Thank you Valsa. always love your limericks.

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Nosheen Irfan 23 March 2017

Full of wit n humor. I myself could never write a limerick. But ur limericks always manage to draw smiles. A10.

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Mj Lemon 13 March 2017

Hi Valsa, Such a great poem! Yes, when one emotion is exhausted, we do seek out another....Too much comedy does awaken the need for something more dramatic...profound observations, Valsa. A 10.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 March 2017

Agree, no more Limericks...............................................................

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Valsa George 14 March 2017

Please don't take such hasty decisions! Your fans will protest!

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Susan Williams 13 March 2017

I find writing humor to be the most difficult write. I can bring you to your knees crying, I can scare the ever-loving stuffing out of you, but can I dependably make you laugh? ? It's a roll of the dice. Great poem about this situation.

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Simone Inez Harriman 13 March 2017

I totally agree with your clever limerick subject Valsa, Sometimes our words that are meant to be light or humorous can backfire and offend. Additionally, I loved your note under your poem. I definitely have to be in the right mood to write otherwise it doesn't happen.

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 March 2017

Beautiful Limerick. Even if they misfire never stop writing...Loved it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 March 2017

Your limerick tells us when to write a limerick.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2017

Marvellous one. Read and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing such a diamond piece.

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Bharati Nayak 12 March 2017

I enjoy your Limericks and more when there are replies from Bri Edwards or Akhtar Jawadji.Thanks for your sharing..

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Muhammad Ali 12 March 2017

you are right, very tough I think its composition that something not just funny but very poetic too. and your limericks, I found beautiful and clear. nice

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