Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Thursday, December 17, 2015

Limerick: Winter Storm Comments

Rating: 4.7

A traveler got lost in a storm
And tried very hard to keep warm
But his fingers soon froze
And also his nose
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Rajnish Manga 23 December 2015

Nicely written and meant to rejoice the reader which it does with no let up. Thanks for providing warmth in the winter storm causing alarm.

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Wes Vogler 17 December 2015

I think I have the best last line concensus: Twas colder than norm

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Wes Vogler 17 December 2015

It may have been colder than norm (yours to use if you like) Keep em coming an 8

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Kim Barney 18 December 2015

I prefer my line, but thanks anyway.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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