Limerick: Winter Storm Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: Winter Storm

Rating: 4.7


A traveler got lost in a storm
And tried very hard to keep warm
But his fingers soon froze
And also his nose
Which seemed a great cause for alarm

Limerick: Winter Storm
Thursday, December 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,humor,humorous,humour,safety,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 16 Dec and 17 Dec 2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 23 December 2015

Nicely written and meant to rejoice the reader which it does with no let up. Thanks for providing warmth in the winter storm causing alarm.

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Wes Vogler 17 December 2015

I think I have the best last line concensus: Twas colder than norm

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Wes Vogler 17 December 2015

It may have been colder than norm (yours to use if you like) Keep em coming an 8

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Kim Barney 18 December 2015

I prefer my line, but thanks anyway.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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