Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Limerick: Two Cannibals Comments

Rating: 4.7

Two cannibals in their town hall
Were having their great feast of fall.
One was in a bad mood;
He did not like the food,
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Kim Barney
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Bri Edwards 29 January 2019

2- [i'm afraid to ask about the photo; it's scary.] a Fall feast? a festival? perhaps cannibal # 1 got an overripe? bri (:

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Kim Barney 21 February 2019

The photo is of a real cannibal. I googled 'cannibal' and learned a lot about modern cannibals!

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Bri Edwards 29 January 2019

1 - i skimmed the comments here & the responses (some): interesting. btw, if you don't like the soundtracks, try muting your computer audio. (this in reference to bio update of this month) you MUST be getting old! you said your poem title is Two Cannibals, but PH lists it as Limerick: Two Cannibals. bad PH, again! ! ! hee-hee. ok, i'm here. i had better read the poem before i forget. (cont.)

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Wes Vogler 13 March 2016

Sorry Kim I always get you and Bri mixed up. He's the eight giver which I think is good. Rating is not being used very much ten or nothing leaves you with no idea how you are doing. OK it's Kim Barney and Bri Edwards (getting old)

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Kim Barney 16 March 2016

How could you get me and Bri mixed up? I'm old but handsome and Bri is still young... :)

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Mj Lemon 10 March 2016

Too funny. Priceless. Reminds me of that old joke....2 cannibals having lunch and the first says to his friend- The mayor of our town makes me sick...sick, sick. His friend replies: Well then, just eat the noodles...A great Limerick.

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Brian Mayo 10 March 2016

lol- -very funny. A little gross, too, which makes it even better. Your limerick is excellent.

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Wes Vogler 10 March 2016

This is good this is good not perfect but this is good

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Brian Mayo 10 March 2016

You only gave this an 8? You could learn a thing or two from this person. If I'm tempted to give a poem less than 10... I don't rate it- -period.

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Wes Vogler 10 March 2016

I shouldn't pay any attention to this creature but for the record Kim and I trade eights as an incentive to improve.

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Brian Mayo 10 March 2016

For the record, I'm sure Kim appreciates you underrating this limerick, as an incentive to improve. What a fantastic idea!

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Kim Barney 13 March 2016

For the REAL record, Wes, I have never voted any of your poems an eight. I'm more like Brian. If I don't feel I can give a poem a ten, I usually don't rate it at all.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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