Two cannibals in their town hall
Were having their great feast of fall.
One was in a bad mood;
He did not like the food,
But the other was having a ball!
2- [i'm afraid to ask about the photo; it's scary.] a Fall feast? a festival? perhaps cannibal # 1 got an overripe? bri (:
The photo is of a real cannibal. I googled 'cannibal' and learned a lot about modern cannibals!
1 - i skimmed the comments here & the responses (some): interesting. btw, if you don't like the soundtracks, try muting your computer audio. (this in reference to bio update of this month) you MUST be getting old! you said your poem title is Two Cannibals, but PH lists it as Limerick: Two Cannibals. bad PH, again! ! ! hee-hee. ok, i'm here. i had better read the poem before i forget. (cont.)
Sorry Kim I always get you and Bri mixed up. He's the eight giver which I think is good. Rating is not being used very much ten or nothing leaves you with no idea how you are doing. OK it's Kim Barney and Bri Edwards (getting old)
How could you get me and Bri mixed up? I'm old but handsome and Bri is still young... :)
Too funny. Priceless. Reminds me of that old joke....2 cannibals having lunch and the first says to his friend- The mayor of our town makes me sick...sick, sick. His friend replies: Well then, just eat the noodles...A great Limerick.
lol- -very funny. A little gross, too, which makes it even better. Your limerick is excellent.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is good this is good not perfect but this is good
You only gave this an 8? You could learn a thing or two from this person. If I'm tempted to give a poem less than 10... I don't rate it- -period.
I shouldn't pay any attention to this creature but for the record Kim and I trade eights as an incentive to improve.