He saw a girl who in looks was so sweet
Behind, on her buttocks gave her a pat
She turned with a frown
And knocked him down
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I am so Cheering! ! ! In fact, Hit him again! ! ! I really really dislike men who put their hands on a female without permission. I also dislike intensely men who make sexual comments to a woman without having been encouraged to do so and in fact having been discouraged from doing so. These men do not respond to hints but they do to a 2X4. I approve mightily of this limerick, Valsa! 10++++++++
i thought lines 1,2, and 5 were supposed to rhyme. hmm? but screw it! i like the poem. i like Akhtar's comment. to MyPoemList. some women are so selfish! ! ! she better not come to his bedside; he has a free hand! on the other hand, he had better not do more patting; she may break an arm (his) next time. bri ;) Valsa-the-comedienne strikes again!
LOL...A little lesson to not invade someones personal space in such an inappropriate way and to never underestimate a persons ability to defend themselves.10
It reminds me of Jack fell down and broke his crown....
Watch out, men with bad intentions! Funny one, Valsa. Like the pucture.
The entire scene is hugely entertaining, Nicely captured in words. Thanks a lot, Valsa ji.
He tried a dangerous thing and paid for it.