On my very last trip into town,
Saw the doc, 'cause was feeling run down.
He said, Kim, I expect
That you've had your eyes checked?
I said, No, Sir, they've always been brown.
Good rhythm. A laugh. Give us some more. You have the limerick form down very satisfactorily in my mind.
reminds me of the guy that was asked: Are you alright? He said: Well no, I'm half left.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well done. I seem to remember hearing an old joke along those lines. Good for you to turn it into a funny limerick!