Limerick: Those Eyes Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: Those Eyes

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On my very last trip into town,
Saw the doc, 'cause was feeling run down.
He said, Kim, I expect
That you've had your eyes checked?
I said, No, Sir, they've always been brown.

Limerick: Those Eyes
Friday, November 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,funny,health,humor,sick,sickness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
18 November 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Jessen 27 May 2018

Well done. I seem to remember hearing an old joke along those lines. Good for you to turn it into a funny limerick!

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Sister Frances 21 November 2016

Very cleverly written :)

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Wes Vogler 20 November 2016

Good rhythm. A laugh. Give us some more. You have the limerick form down very satisfactorily in my mind.

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Spock The Vegan 19 November 2016

reminds me of the guy that was asked: Are you alright? He said: Well no, I'm half left.

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