Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, August 7, 2016

Limerick: Thin Hair Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked in the mirror in dismay.
Why can't my hair just keep going gray?
Like many of my kin,
My hair is getting thin,
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Kim Barney
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Spock The Vegan 08 August 2016

I can relate. At least you got your poem submitted. I have tried 3 times today with no luck.

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Annette Aitken 08 August 2016

enjoyed this limerick put a smile on my face thanks. annette

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 August 2016

Must agree....However as for me, I went a bit extreme after a week of pulling fistfuls of my once awesome hair from my brush and the shower drain.Soon as I saw sclap...I'd seen enough...I shaved it all...one less thing to do everyday & I was okay with the new look & others reaction to it.......But then what do I do? I grow a pencil thin V shaped beard that has to be finely trimmed & sculpted everyday...One more thing to do...but who wants a thick bushy beard anyway, unless your a groupie for ZZ Top! Solid penning....~FjR-'16~

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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