Saturday, February 29, 2020

(limerick) The Unamused Moose Comments

Rating: 5.0

No sense trying to teach a wild moose how
To relax in confines of the hoosegow
His uniform won't fit
And he'll be in a snit...
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WES Vogler
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Kim Barney 29 February 2020

Limerick is very well done!

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wes vogler 29 February 2020

I had to tinker with it but I am satisfied and Allpoetry loves it

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wes vogler 03 March 2020

The only reason I do not recommend everyone join allpoetry is this nuisance of having to critique two verses for everyone you put up ... of course you do meet new people that way but there are days nothing really is worthy of a critique in my opinion

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WES Vogler

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