Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, June 27, 2018

Limerick: The Trophy Deer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frank shot a deer across the way
and strung it up, a fine display.
You should have seen it!
He failed to clean it,
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wes vogler 23 July 2018

whoa! I do believe you have somewhat mastered the limerick Regarding the deer.. would the gaseous condition result in an explosion]

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

Dear became bigger and amazed mind. This funny limerick is really very brilliant and amazing....10

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Robert Murray Smith 27 June 2018

Great poem. Terrible subject. To shoot a deer I cannot bare.++10

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Martin Roberts 28 June 2018

The word is bear, not bare, Robert. I couldn't bear to shoot a deer either, but I have no problem with others who kill animals for food. Unless you are a vegetarian, you have eaten animals that were killed for food. Chicken? Beef? Pork? They didn't die of natural causes. (If they did, it's not safe to eat them!)

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Kelly Kurt 27 June 2018

The bloating from bacteria, eating tissue and then the farting of the same. Probably didn't smell great either. : -)

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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