Limerick: The Old Water Trough Comments

It is rather sad to see things growing old and worse when they have been forgotten. Restore that old trough even if there's no deer it will become a bird bath. Loving your limericks.

But don't ever try to fill it with your tears.....! Ha.... ha!

I am glad you are using the limerick form for narrative. The more you use it the easier it is to write yet another. I love the discipline of this form. I find it entertaining

Now I'll shed a few tears. That thing is not fit for deer nor cow... I know your feeling and grief. The trough is no more in use due to unhuman persons. A poem having stunning expression has been shared. Thank u sir.