Friday, October 30, 2015

Limerick-The Lioness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out in the Serengeti waited a hungry lioness
Spied a porcupine minding his own business
Ah! Dinner is served
Got what she deserved
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COMMENTS
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 October 2015

Verily, haste is a waste

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Valsa George 30 October 2015

We should first think about the consequences of an action before venturing into it! This is a great limerick! Its authenticity is confirmed by the picture it accompanies! A 10

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2015

We all know we shouldn't eat certain things but we do anyway: -)

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2015

Wrong attempt....hungry or angry on self, must be repenting what she did...........Lovely limerick.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2015

Porcupine made the lioness speechless instead of providing dinner. So nicely depicted. Funny and painful. Enjoyed.

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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

Yeah... this happens when you try to mess with a porcupine! Funny one.10

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