Tuesday, April 17, 2018

Limerick: The Industrious Squatter Comments

Rating: 4.9

There once was a mole I named Digger

It wanted to make its home bigger
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Bri Edwards 28 July 2018

Lorraine, this is going, very soon, into my/(our) August showcase. Thanks. bri :) p.s. i usually never see responses, typed on other poets' poem pages, to my poem comments. i only see yours now because i came back to leave the new comment. Thanks. i'd say we have gophers (of some sort) , as there are sometimes dirt mounds a foot across and almost as high! could moles be so industrious! ?

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Bri Edwards 25 July 2018

this DOES sound so familiar! ! ! ! did Longfellow write it? come on, tell the truth! ! to MyPoemList. i also plan to use it in August's showcase. bri ;) poor, poor Digger, the little digger!

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Thank you! Oh Longfellow never wrote Limericks..And sad to say the lawn mower people mowed poor little Digger's village down and the mole gave up..no more dirt mounds in the neighbor's yard..

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There are quite a few limericks about moles..Shakespeare also wrote limericks, some were included in his plays.....I just researched on line..

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I didn't find any poems similar to mine on line.Just to let you know I write my poems and there are times when they are difficult to write..Sometimes I post them on Facebook but most of them are on PoemHunter..

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Muzahidul Reza 12 June 2018

Alas! Rest in peace little digger...... though limerick, the poem is wisely penned, loved, thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++++++++ 10

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Khairul Ahsan 01 June 2018

Seems to me to be perfect limerick. The poor Digger couldn't reap the benefits of his/her industry! Loved the humor in the sorrow.

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Perdita Young 11 May 2018

Lovely humorous limerick! The mole seems a workaholic that never bothers about a purpose of life.

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Steve Howard 02 May 2018

Cool Limerick. 😃 thanks. The day needs brightening time to time.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 April 2018

Aha I dig this poem. Fantastic Limerick u thought up, thanx fir the poetic fun this morning. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, dark skinned vs fair skin, I would love to hear your views

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Bipasha D 17 April 2018

Loved the Limerick. A perfect one. So sad, poor Digger was overworked and died!

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Digger still digs and is very much alive despite the fact that the lawn mower people mowed down Moleville twice.It is one persistent little critter..Right now the little mole is stopped by the curb and just makes its mole hills along the edge..

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