This great hunter went out hunting in a boat
A crocodile to get in a place quite remote
Before he could act
The crocodile attacked
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Hahaha! another sad (funny) story of a poor hunter! enjoyed it.
Though I'm laughing it really is sad...Thank you Loke Kok Yee, you are a Limerickist...a great one...maybe no such word huh lol....
Why is he running with such a great muscular body? Nice one LKY..10+++
If he is alive, hope we shall meet him in your next limerick! Enjoyed!
last line: may i suggest " boat's" in place of " boat is" ? ? i just DID! bri :) to MyPoemList