Saturday, October 24, 2015

Limerick-The Great Hunter-4 Comments

Rating: 5.0

This great hunter went out hunting in a boat
A crocodile to get in a place quite remote
Before he could act
The crocodile attacked
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Loke Kok yee
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Bri Edwards 10 March 2019

last line: may i suggest " boat's" in place of " boat is" ? ? i just DID! bri :) to MyPoemList

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Sanjukta Nag 26 October 2015

Hahaha! another sad (funny) story of a poor hunter! enjoyed it.

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Melvina Germain 25 October 2015

Though I'm laughing it really is sad...Thank you Loke Kok Yee, you are a Limerickist...a great one...maybe no such word huh lol....

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M Asim Nehal 25 October 2015

Why is he running with such a great muscular body? Nice one LKY..10+++

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Loke Kok Yee 25 October 2015

more meaty more food for croc

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Valsa George 25 October 2015

If he is alive, hope we shall meet him in your next limerick! Enjoyed!

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