Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Limerick-The Great Hunter-11 Comments

Rating: 5.0

This great hunter needed to put meat on the table
Now a zebra he reckoned would nicely fit the label
Thought a dagger will do the trick
The zebra retaliated with a kick
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Loke Kok yee
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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015

Ha ha...I will never try that way.....Superb Mr. Loke.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Wonderful great hunter is in wise imagery. Very wisely expressed poem.10

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Valsa George 04 November 2015

An interesting limerick! You have created a character who falls into the trap he himself lays! Poo hunter!

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Sanjukta Nag 03 November 2015

Another great hunter with a great idea of killing it with a dagger. Very amusing. Enjoyed it so much.10

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