Tuesday, March 26, 2019

(limerick)the Food Chain Comments

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When I heard a shrill shriek from my daughter
(She was taking a dip in the water)
I just yanked the girl out
She'd a mark and a pout
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WES Vogler
daughter girl water limerick
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Kim Barney 28 March 2019

She's much too young to be your daughter! Should you rewrite this? You oughter!

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wes vogler 28 March 2019

it's a limerick

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tom billsborough 28 March 2019

I might try this one with Wanda, Anaconda and kinda fonda of a quick snack. Food for thought.

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Kim Barney 28 March 2019

What has happened to my friend Wanda? She played with my pet anaconda. Now his tummy is fat so I believe that of that girl he musta been fonda..

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Kelly Kurt 26 March 2019

I hope it's not a true story.

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wes vogler 26 March 2019

just an exercise to make a lim of daughter water soughter

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WES Vogler

Vancouver BC Canada
WES Vogler
WES Vogler
Vancouver BC Canada
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