Monday, February 19, 2018

Limerick-The Floozy-9 Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was this floozy who is a bender
Sometimes unsure of his own gender
With the ladies he'll play
And also, guys who're gay
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Loke Kok yee
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bri edwards 25 March 2018

(continued) ..........and i suppose the bender both was and is, but i'd maybe stick to one tense per line for him. to MyPoemList. i actually am looking for the Floozy photo of the heavyset woman, 'older' woman, with the heavy lipstick etc. i want to send a link to MJ Lemon, as he wrote a little poem related to such an image. perhaps to a showcase soon? bri ;)

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bri edwards 25 March 2018

i would add in in front of awhile, but perhaps your construction is proper if you are talking about the bender.....(i like that word usage; never heard it before) ....only once, for a short time, playing with both sexes together. to MyPoemList. lovely photo. i can't decide which profile i would be more attracted to! how about a bare-chest shot; that may help me to decide! (to be continued) ........

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loke kok yee 30 March 2018

Nay! a bare chest shot might put you off!

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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2018

A wonderful limerick, Loke Kok Yee is now master of Limericks.

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Loke Kok Yee 16 March 2018

Thank you sir, I am not sure of the 'master' part but I find limericks great fun and relatively easy to write.

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valsa george 05 March 2018

I perfectly agree with Geeta's comment.....! Though it is difficult to decide the gender here, this limerick is unmistakably a splendor! !

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Loke Kok Yee 16 March 2018

Thanks Valsa, I saw the pic on the net and could not resist writing on it.

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Simone Inez Harriman 20 February 2018

Lol, I enjoyed your hilarious write Loke, and seeing the picture one can quite understand bi- orientation.

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Loke Kok Yee 16 March 2018

I don't, but I do have some good friends who are like that; but for sure I will never pass judgement on them.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 February 2018

Fabulous picture. Whether a bender or a gender The poem is a splendour! Top marks for the Floozy series!

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Loke Kok Yee 16 March 2018

Thanks Geeta, my PH site is behaving well again.

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