Friday, January 12, 2018

Limerick-The Floozy-2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was this floozy always in good cheer
But she was not much to look at, I fear
Would sit where it's dim
To appear less grim
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Loke Kok yee
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Bri Edwards 25 March 2018

as floozies 'go', this one ain't 'too bad'...............if i were living on another planet! ;) bri

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loke kok yee 30 March 2018

We get less fussy as we age! Ho! Ho! Ho!

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Rajnish Manga 12 January 2018

In one word it's a 'Fantastc' Limerick. Shows how the knowledge of human nature pays off. Cheers for the beer. Thanks, Loke.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

You are most welcomed my friend, Thank you for visiting and leaving your kind comments.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2018

O dear! what a cheer! Wonderful Limerick and a wonderful picture too. Loke, i would like to give hundred marks for this poem but unfortunately, the vote button is not functioning. i have to wait till it is rectified. Apologies!

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Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

No apologies needed Geeta, glad it brought you some cheer! Thanks for your comments.

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Valsa George 12 January 2018

Your characters are indeed clever! By hook or by crook, 'clever' people can survive! She knows all tricks of the trade! Another outstanding limerick. Top marks!

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Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

Thanks Valsa, looks like I will have to push out more of the same.

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