Friday, January 5, 2018

Limerick-The Floozy-1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was this floozy rather old
Loves to canoodle with the bold
She would ply them with beer
Till their eyes were quite blear
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Loke Kok yee
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Mj Lemon 26 March 2018

Bri, I read several times. First reaction- -said to myself, Too true. After a second and third reading, the humour came bubbling to the surface. I reread and began to scroll down....and went some innocence, falling victim to.... Great humour, Bri!

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

Thanks for the visit MJ, hope the humour brought you a smile.

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Bri Edwards 25 March 2018

well, i FINALLY found the photo i was searching for! ! ! i'll send the link to MJ Lemon soon, before PH erases the page to protect the innocent. :)

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loke kok yee 30 March 2018

I am surprised that they haven't yet.

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2018

i have seen much younger (i think) women with eyes made similarly. aging can be tough on egos. and why not try to look one's best! ? she may just look like 'another old woman' without (so much) makeup, and is trying to save some of her youth. bri ;)

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Loke Kok Yee 06 January 2018

Your reaction tells me that you have a soft spot for her, Ho! Ho! Ho! I'm sorry Bri, I'm not even sure if it's a 'she'.

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2018

But, ....................seriously.................. actually, i've seen people who apparently were obsessive-compulsive with makeup. they are probably frequently nice people, just as 'very attractive' people can be 'not nice'. REMEMBER the saying: you can't tell a book by its cover! AND beauty is in the eye of the beholder! ! to MyPoemList. thanks. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2018

NICE rhythm, and a bit of humor. i'll give you 'poetic license' for blear. OOPS! my error! ! ! i did not know of the definition of blear; i AM familiar with bleary. How DID you get a photo of my beloved mother! ? the photo shall haunt my dreams ceaselessly! (to be continued) ...

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Akhtar Jawad 06 January 2018

enjoyed the humor, but I think very few women are like this, at least I haven't seen any floozy in the society I have been living.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 January 2018

Though the Limerick is meant to be humourous, here, i feel sad again. Those who dress up like this are like circus clowns who laugh to show the world but cry from within. Loke, you have a special talent for Limericks and images too.

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Loke Kok Yee 06 January 2018

Nothing to feel sad about Geeta, he/she was just posing for a picture shoot.

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Valsa George 05 January 2018

Oh..... my! She never realizes that her time is over! I wonder from where you gather such apt pictures! You pen such humorous limericks! Stay on here, dear friend Loke!

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Loke Kok Yee 06 January 2018

This is all just humour and no offense intended. The picture is probably that of a drag queen and not a woman. Thanks Valsa, and I will look for more similar pictures to continue the fun.

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