Friday, November 13, 2015

Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-14 Comments

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This fighter pilot was on a transit flight
In navigation he was not so bright
His compass he read wrong
But his fuel did not last long
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Loke Kok yee
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Bri Edwards 17 May 2016

Bro, besides one tiny typo, I would change one word. Otherwise, this is nice rhyming verse and quite entertaining! Probably a Malaysian pilot. Bri :)

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Loke Kok Yee 17 May 2016

With eyes like yours you will make a great fighter pilot thanks for pointing out the typo.

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M Asim Nehal 15 November 2015

It is good that he was alive.....We may look forward for another flight......Lovely, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Wonderful imaginary. Amusing one. Thanks for sharing. - - - - 10

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