Limerick- Snoring Comments

Like the waves that roar His wife woke up as if from a gun shot

Hello and thanks, this condition is a big problem for many people nowadays, but here our great and talented poet managed to address the issue very poetically, by showing the comic side of it, well done and have a big 10++ and onto my fav list

A domestic war! Peace no more! This is brilliant Valsa, to myfavourites.

is this the way YOU would punctuate? ? ? ? Late he got back home distraught And fell asleep on his cot. (or ;) Soon he began to snore. Like the waves that roar, His wife woke up as if from a gun shot. i like it. to MyPoemList. bri :)

Ha Ha......Interesting Limerick on snoring. Loved it.

You have captured a very funny scene so well!

Snorer knows not what snoring and its effects are. He needs a wake up call I think.

Hahaha! We all know the feeling!

His wife woke up as if from a gun shot... ha... ha... ha... funny realy. It is beautiful limerick full of humour.

Helpless husband, what he could do if he had problems in his nostrills. Enjoyed it as fun.

Hahaha. Very witty. Thanx for making us laugh.