Monday, April 10, 2017

Limerick- Self Defence Comments

Rating: 5.0

A man always carried a sharp knife
He was afraid of his brutish wife
All thought him to be queer
From him, children ran in fear
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Valsa George
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Narayana Aghalaya 27 March 2018

when in strife, caused by wife, be equipped with knife.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 July 2017

Just leave her and get another wife Foolish to live in a life of strife Carrying a knife around Will make you appear unsound And no peace e'en in your afterlife You are such fun Valsa! Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2017

This is also excellent and humorous Limerick shared here. All went away due to fear to him but nobody knew how he got strife. An amazing sharing this is really...10

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Hazel Durham 16 April 2017

Fear makes people act out of character as vividly written in this wonderful Limerick!

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Nosheen Irfan 13 April 2017

The instinct of self-defence is very sharp in man. You have depicted this inherent impulse in a witty way. Well-penned. A10

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Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2017

Suicide (A Reply to Self Defence by Valsa George Poor man! Committed suicide with his knife How he could kill his beloved wife, Couldn't be punished, an offence, That ne'er needs any defence, The only option to end the strife.. Should I submit this reply at PH?

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Valsa George 12 April 2017

As ever, fine response to my limerick, Akhtar ji! Of course you may publish it on Poem hunter! Definitely our friends will enjoy!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2017

Inner strife no one knows but the limerick shows.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2017

Inner strife! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 10 April 2017

A limerick to stiffen our backs. Thanks for sharing.

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Spock The Vegan 10 April 2017

Another limerick writer! I have several new limericks you might want to check out.

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