Those of you who are sixty plus;
May find it difficult to board a bus;
Take from bank a personal loan,
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I'm grateful to you for your kind words of appreciation, Dear Friend.
haha so much more is difficult after sixty. Its battle of will. What to pick and what to leave.Great limerick.
DIL TtARASSS GAYAA APKEE AWAAJ NOT ABLE TO LISTEN DEAF POET WHO CARES - -should not be your admission do read my A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR'S POEM ANGELS 2018 MEANT ALSO FOR YOU AND OH BELOVED just posted Yes if time is available to/with u
Take from bank a personal loan, Purchase with it a sturdy drone, laughing point of view, thanks for sharing
It's always a pleasure to read your comments. Thanks, Dear Friend, for a positive feedback.
wow! great laughter, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in poemhum
A limeric on senior citizen is so astutely and amusingly delineated. Enjoyed, thanks.
It's a pleasure to note that the limerick has provided fun and a bit of smile. Thanks, Dear Kumarmani ji.
When you are sixty and above, you enter into phase of freedom or as Shakespeare says into second childhood It is a good time, when you begin to enjoy life with ease and lesser responsibilities. Right Rajnish ji, there is nothing to fuss about.
Thanks a lot, Geeta ji. I'm extremely pleased to have this humble poem reviewed by you so thoughtfully. Shakespeare and you both are right when dwelling on old age. Incidentally, long back, my father fell on the road while de-boarding a bus and got serious injuries. He could not recover from the impact. Today, we observe his 27th death anniversary.
thank ALMIGHTY I am 75 plus need no bus no loans no fuss only car for bus and MERRY XMAS THUS THUS thus poet ji
Thanks for your lovely comments, dear friend. Merry Christmas & Season's Greetings.
To enjoy life riskfree like a child.Wonderful write!
Growing up along the paths of life! ! Growing old. Dedicated to 60 Plus! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I am extremely happy to receive a positive feedback from you, Edward.
Nice well written Limerick.