Limerick R53 (Live Wire) Comments
Daisy had a cherished desire;
To jump and walk upon a wire;
Soon she got her chance,
To jump, walk and dance,
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A poem on the psychology of the child's mind. The conclusion is left to the readers to imagine which makes the poem more interesting.Excellent.! +10
Thanks for a fine review of the poem in the light of child psychology. Nice that you liked it.
Unfortunately, curiosity always kills the cat! 🐈 🐈 🐈 This is funny and a very poignant one to think of it. We all have had these live wires, I remembered mine about a decade and a half ago. Wonderful limerick Mr Manga. Thanks for sharing: -)
Though, curiosity is a common characteristic, it needs a careful scrutiny taking any action. Thank God you came out unscathed out of your ordeal. Thanks for the support.
Soon she got her chance, To jump, walk and dance, She later found it was live wire.... Diasy' s desire and the tragic consequence........ i derive a philosophy from your poem.. wishes and aspirations are good. but when the chance comes think twice.. tony
Thanks, Dr Tony, for being on the page. Your philosophical analysis transforms even the mundane into an object of divine beauty.
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8/5/2025 2:19:49 AM # 1.0.0
Excellent Limerick. Thank u.anjandev roy.