Limerick R45 Bottle Of Rum Comments
Mr. Moody was in a serious problem;
It was Evening and his Face was Glum;
Does not ever brood,
But when in a mood,
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What a sad state to be in. Unable to live without rum. This does not bring happiness.
This Limerick which carries humor wisely says about lifestyle at modern society. The time has changed and man has adopted new lifestyle. Mr. Moody in his mood. Wonderful observation is shared...10
You have nicely captured the element of humour ingrained here in these lines. Thanks for your appreciative comments, Pintu ji.
I do not think you'll see a limerick written by me... I do not seem to have the knack and always sound like a hack so I'll just enjoy yours.
You are already a celebrity poet and now you have shown your flair for limericks, too. I hope you would share some more poems in this form. Thanks a lot, Susan.
It's gratifying to receive appreciative reviews from seniors. Thanks for your kind words about this poem (Bottle Of Rum) .
Witty and humourous, like Mr Moody I like Rum with Coke :) I am always fascinated by LImericks, have not been brave enough to attempt to write one.
I am glad that you liked this poem. I appreciate your fascination for Limericks and would like to see some of these coming from you. Thanks a lot.
Boozy boozy fun.....great limerick....thank you Rajnish- 10+++
It is indeed an honour to have received appreciating comments from you. Thank you, Indira ji.
Great limerick....! There are such 'Moodys' who get brightened up only with a bottle of rum....! Unfortunately once they come to their real 'moods', they will be walking on four legs!
Thanks for your appreciative comments, Valsa ji.I completely agree with your observations about dipsomaniacs.
This limerick is really very interesting. Bottle rum interestingly does magic here....10
this limerick is really very interesting. bottle rum interestingly doed magic here.
He cannot live without a bottle of Rum................. Beautiful craft in choosing the Hero's name as Mr. MOODY. Another good quality of Mr. M. we experiencing now and then The Battle of Drums he likes much. Thanks.
You have really made a value addition to the poem with your most exhilarating comments. Thank you, Pranab.
Thank you, Michael, for appreciating the poem with a focused analysis.
And what if he get hold of a Drum of Rum....A fantastic limerick.
Wow.... Drum of Rum. That will be a bonus. Thank you, Mohd. Asim ji.
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8/2/2025 1:30:27 AM # 1.0.0
Limeric serves its purpose Of poetic justice