Tuesday, December 15, 2015

Limerick R32 (Hindi) Wonderful Ape / बनमानुस Comments

Rating: 5.0

There once was a wonderful ape.
Who gave up his skin for a cape.
Now he swings in the trees,
All exposed to the breeze,
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Rajnish Manga
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Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 May 2020

" भलमानुस" दरअसल वह भलामानुस ही था। मार्मिक! Great translation. I feel sad for the wise ape. It also exposes(shows) the poet a भला मानस(bhalâ mānûs) , man of lovely nature.

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Anjandev Roy 04 May 2020

Great Limerick. Enjoyed it. anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

Changes! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Wes Vogler 09 January 2016

The limerick form is beyond reproach and the meter is perfect. You are writing limericks with confidence.

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M Asim Nehal 16 December 2015

Bahut badiya.....Maza aagaya...10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 December 2015

Very amusing limerick. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kim Barney 15 December 2015

Very funny and done in true limerick style. Good job.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Wonderful ape gives his skin for a cape is very amazing in this fun giving Limerick. All words are exposed to the breeze. Fantastic sharing done definitely. Wisely penned poem.10

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