Thursday, November 12, 2015

Limerick R25: A Smiling Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

A friend of mine always keeps smiling;
He gets up smiling and sleeps smiling;

Laughs in good times,
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Rajnish Manga
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Bri Edwards 17 January 2019

It's all done with 'smoke and mirrors'. When he's alone, those weeping tears are for sure not smiling, but frowning; I'll bet my life. I'm NOT now clowning. OR....with a frozen smile he is afflicted, & mentally off. He's for sure Smile-Addicted! I'd not trust the guy. bri ) :

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Rajnish Manga 18 January 2019

Thanks for a nice review of the poem despite the guy committing this breach of trust.

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Sriranji Aratisankar 15 August 2016

And when In bad times, weeps smiling. The best limerick, full of humour and fun...10...

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 May 2016

Laughter is a medicine to the heart! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adeline Foster 13 November 2015

Great, you have caught the limerick perfectly. Read mine - Limerick - Adeline

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Valsa George 13 November 2015

He must be a source of inspiration to many! You are fortunate to have such a friend......! I just try to visualize his smiling face! Sweet limerick!

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Rajnish Manga 13 November 2015

Your analytical comments have always inspired me to write something new. The appreciation that I receive from you means a lot. Thank you, Valsa ji.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

I surely will like to meet your friend Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 13 November 2015

If I catch hold of him ever, I will bring it to you. That's a promise. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Having humors with smiling face of friend is fantastic in this sharing. Very nicely penned....10

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Rajnish Manga 13 November 2015

Thank you so much, Kumarmani ji, for an appreciative review.

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Melvina Germain 12 November 2015

Oh my gosh, I need to touch this friend of yours and reap the benefits of smiling...Lovely poem Rajnish.....

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Rajnish Manga 13 November 2015

Your visit to this page and your appreciative comments are most welcome. This will encourage me.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2015

Interesting and amazing, liked it..................................10

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Rajnish Manga 13 November 2015

Thanks for these words of appreciation, Sir.

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