Thursday, March 8, 2018

Limerick- Please Don't Stare Comments

Rating: 5.0

After his booze, getting out of bed
In a timorous voice, he said;
"I am in my underwear
It's torn, please don't stare
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2022

You have mastered the art of composing Limerick. Liked this poem.5 stars.

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Mj Lemon 01 June 2019

This is absolutely hilarious....Now I just can't stop wondering- -Just where is that bed! This one goes to myfavourites!

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 April 2018

Interesting Limerick. No wonder the picture too fits on the frame. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2018

Boozing old man, I am sorry for him, rightly said he finds himself in an embarrassing situations. An interesting Limerick, enjoyed it.

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Kostas Lagos 16 March 2018

OK, you conviced me! I won't drink another sip of wine in my life! Great poem!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 March 2018

Boozing man with great imagination. Nicely captured.

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Indira Renganathan 13 March 2018

Superb limerick...it simply defines a boozy man... your note also says clearly about its consequence... excellent work

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

This is a limerick carrying all ingredients of a limerick! Enjoyed the humor.....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2018

We cannot stop smiling very large hearing this Limerick. Man's condition was amazingly painted through expression of poetic words. This seems to be very humorous...10

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 March 2018

Yes, that is the moment of realization! You have captured it perfectly in this well-written limerick!

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Valsa George 10 March 2018

Thank you Loke, king of limericks! You may please note...... The booze put him to such plight The ladies thought it impolite To linger there and stare At a man shamefully bare So they prudently took to flight!

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Loke Kok Yee 10 March 2018

Nothing much to see I fear And no reason for to leer With or without the booze He's nothing more to lose From the front or from the rear Ho! Ho! Ho! Thanks Valsa, you never let me down with your humour.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 March 2018

Valsa, I burst out laughing 😂😂😂😆😆😆....10++++

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Rini. 09 March 2018

Haha wonderful limerick..you made me laugh early morning..10

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