He got down from the train with his baggage
Walked out through a dirty soiled passage
His attention was captured
By a bold lettered Placard;
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Beautifully crafted with a meaningful message. Top Marks! ! ! !
Another excellent limerick woven brilliantly with wit and humor.
The irony! This is brilliant, Valsa. I do hope you will reconsider...and I hope we can look forward to more of your verses in 2021!
Reading this fun giving poem once again we fell very happy. This poem is really very amazing.
Yes ma'am we need some people like this to keep reminding of our inbuilt inner dirt too. Thank-you ma'am
So poignant! An arrow straight to the heart! this is my first reading of your poem today. Will scroll to few more. I hope it takes me to your new poems as the old format used to do.
Liked the Limerick very much for its powerful punch. Such irony is significant in a society that rely on hypocrisy for false publicity. It's one of your best Limericks. Tony poem
How are we cleaning the passage is so nicely painted in a satiric manner. The graphic provided by you is so interesting which increases the irony. Gorgeous work. Five stars.
Well and aptly expressed, Valsa. Nice visual also. Good Limerick
no one but you could have limericked better keep teaching all those who love stink to wash their soiled clothes in cleaner ink well doneeee ms
The picture, Valsa, underscores the irony of the limerick. This one flows well. A suggestion: “his” baggage to my ear would sound more colloquial than “a” baggage. -Glen
Hey! How did you get ME in the photo? ? ? ! I'd call it (not " a baggage" ;) " a suitcase" . I'm NOT trying to make you " LOSE face" . The photo, it sure does 'stink'. Now I'm almost out of 'ink', I'll leave before you can BLINK! Not bad. Both of them. bri ;))
This is more a preaching limerick....worth reading for many times...worthy of more than 5 stars...
A great reminder. Missing your poetry. Where are you my poet friend?