Tuesday, December 15, 2020

Limerick- Placard Comments

Rating: 5.0

He got down from the train with his baggage
Walked out through a dirty soiled passage
His attention was captured
By a bold lettered Placard;
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Aarzoo Mehek 28 November 2021

A great reminder. Missing your poetry. Where are you my poet friend?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2021

Beautifully crafted with a meaningful message. Top Marks! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2021

Another excellent limerick woven brilliantly with wit and humor.

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M.J. Lemon 17 January 2021

The irony! This is brilliant, Valsa. I do hope you will reconsider...and I hope we can look forward to more of your verses in 2021!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2021

Reading this fun giving poem once again we fell very happy. This poem is really very amazing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 December 2020

nice satirical limerick

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Varsha M 23 December 2020

Yes ma'am we need some people like this to keep reminding of our inbuilt inner dirt too. Thank-you ma'am

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Savita Tyagi 23 December 2020

So poignant! An arrow straight to the heart! this is my first reading of your poem today. Will scroll to few more. I hope it takes me to your new poems as the old format used to do.

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Liked the Limerick very much for its powerful punch. Such irony is significant in a society that rely on hypocrisy for false publicity. It's one of your best Limericks. Tony poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2020

How are we cleaning the passage is so nicely painted in a satiric manner. The graphic provided by you is so interesting which increases the irony. Gorgeous work. Five stars.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 December 2020

Well and aptly expressed, Valsa. Nice visual also. Good Limerick

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 December 2020

no one but you could have limericked better keep teaching all those who love stink to wash their soiled clothes in cleaner ink well doneeee ms

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2020

The picture, Valsa, underscores the irony of the limerick. This one flows well. A suggestion: “his” baggage to my ear would sound more colloquial than “a” baggage. -Glen

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2020

Hey! How did you get ME in the photo? ? ? ! I'd call it (not " a baggage" ;) " a suitcase" . I'm NOT trying to make you " LOSE face" . The photo, it sure does 'stink'. Now I'm almost out of 'ink', I'll leave before you can BLINK! Not bad. Both of them. bri ;))

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Indira Renganathan 16 December 2020

This is more a preaching limerick....worth reading for many times...worthy of more than 5 stars...

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