He got down from the train with his baggage
Walked out through a dirty soiled passage
His attention was captured
By a bold lettered Placard;
‘KEEP THE TOWN CLEAN' atop piles of garbage
Yes ma'am we need some people like this to keep reminding of our inbuilt inner dirt too. Thank-you ma'am
So poignant! An arrow straight to the heart! this is my first reading of your poem today. Will scroll to few more. I hope it takes me to your new poems as the old format used to do.
Liked the Limerick very much for its powerful punch. Such irony is significant in a society that rely on hypocrisy for false publicity. It's one of your best Limericks. Tony poem
How are we cleaning the passage is so nicely painted in a satiric manner. The graphic provided by you is so interesting which increases the irony. Gorgeous work. Five stars.
A great reminder. Missing your poetry. Where are you my poet friend?
Beautifully crafted with a meaningful message. Top Marks! ! ! !
Another excellent limerick woven brilliantly with wit and humor.
The irony! This is brilliant, Valsa. I do hope you will reconsider...and I hope we can look forward to more of your verses in 2021!
Reading this fun giving poem once again we fell very happy. This poem is really very amazing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice satirical limerick