Friday, June 28, 2013

Limerick- Our Love Comments

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Our love grows with each year
Our love grows with each tear
Our love grows with each kiss
Our love grows with pearls of bliss
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Soulful Heart 08 July 2013

Small pack of wonderful love .. nice n simple ..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 June 2013

Lovely.

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Sankaran Ayya 28 June 2013

Nice limerick. But why have you deviated from limerick definition in the 5th line adding limerick itself to cheers. End with cheers sounds good. - - - KAVIN CHARALAN

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Heather Wilkins 28 June 2013

a well written limerick.

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