Limerick- On The Point Of A Knife Comments

A limerick with all the colours, good satire, but the picture accompanying does not look as if they are fighting, to me.

The limerick on love, life, marriage and separation has satirically been handled

A true limerick where the spice of life is spliced.

Amusing and terrifying! Valsa, this is a perfect blend of comedy and terror. This goes to myfavourites.

Sharp, amusing and still full of wisdom! Reckless behavior has consequences!

As Kumarmani says, the effect of alcohol is well expressed in this limerick..why the the couple were in love for years before their marriage...perhaps to go to ..? a serious matter, yet sometimes people only laugh at such stupid folly ..so this poem is well fit in a limerick format Valsa..great work

Ooooh. Can there have been a more abrupt ending? Yikes! -Glen

Dear madam, you have so brilliantly expressed the effect of alcohol in this Limerick. A well executed poem is amazingly posted. Thanks for sharing.10

we all must think when too much we drink this is but a natural happening slicing instead of kissing I am the one who will do what I want to Bad decision No chance now to compromise Drunkards two who would now listen to them too NEITHER ME NOR VALSA GEORGE POETESS YOU

Life crossed wisdom And knife ended their life

A cutting last line.

But after a drunken night/They had a terrible fight........I can imagine the situation! An amazing Limerick dear madam...........................10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Poem with sharp humor Valsa!

drunkard life stands as the sharp knife between husband and wife!