Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Friday, June 7, 2019

Limerick: On The Floor Comments

Rating: 4.9

With a chance to improve my old score
I indulged in the great game once more
but two draws and a loss
and those thoughts I can toss
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Kim Barney
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Aniruddha Pathak 23 June 2019

A limerick describing what actually happened is more credible than one penned out of reference. And there is a nice pun on floor, (something like handicap in golf?) . I liked reading it.

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

here is my message response to your recent poem comment (thanks) , and I'd send as a private message, but PH says you won't allow it! : Kim Barney: Left Out! ! ! Old Kim Barney was, in my " Standing.." poem, left out, but NOW I've received his check so I'll gladly shout... " Kim is NOT a really bad poet. In fact he's pretty good. Next time, Kim, send check by Express Mail! You SHOULD! ! btw your poem ain't bad; to MyPoemList bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2019

So beautifully and amusingly delineated Limerick with fun and humor is amazingly shared. It is is nice to juxtpose a appropriate graphic. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10

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wes vogler 11 June 2019

my time was wasted at five pins my highest score was 433 The eleventh strike left the two pin which I smashed fiendishly on the last ball I did get a ring for high score that year which I gave to my sweetheart (future wife) and she lost it while boating

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Darwin Henry Beuning 08 June 2019

Kim, Great Limerick and great picture. Picture has us engaged in chess action, but, on different boards. I rate a " 10" and have added it to My Poem List.

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Kim Barney 08 June 2019

Thanks for the comment, Hank. The comment is worth more to me than the 10 rating, but thanks for both.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 June 2019

A great game of chess, sir Kim......10++++++++++++++

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Kim Barney 08 June 2019

Yes, Bernard, chess is a great game - - the best in the world. Thanks for commenting.

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Kim Barney 08 June 2019

Both Hank and I are in this picture, and I can identify at least four other players. This is not our most recent tournament, but one that was played a couple of years ago.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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