Sunday, November 29, 2015

Limerick Of The Dry Fruits Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fruits of love are now changing their shapes,
the raisins you see were nice juicy grapes,
food value and sweetness on the higher side,
tasteful in the winter for a casual tide,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2015

Fruits of love are changing their shapes and value of food and sweetness are tasteful with amazing imagination shared here. Marvelous expression is shared with new wings of mind to fly in literary sky. Interesting and nice.10

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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

Juicy fruits once now have become dry....So is the life, satire and witty part is fantastic with philosophical undertone.

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Kelly Kurt 30 November 2015

A nicely witty limerick, Akhtar. Thanks

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