Monday, March 19, 2018

Limerick- My Last Resort Comments

Rating: 5.0

When my thoughts with rhymes hardly fit
When words and phrases fail sadly to hit
I turn to limerick
It is a clever trick
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Valsa George
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Savita Tyagi 18 April 2020

I like that! But my mind doesn’t work as good with limerick and I have to resort to other means. Thanks Valsa. Always enjoy your limericks.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 April 2018

A wonderful Limerick Valsa. May be I should also try. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2018

Valsa George you are one of my teachers and I have learnt a lot from you. I also do the same. You admit and I confess. A great Limerick.

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Glen Kappy 30 March 2018

yes, valsa, sometimes we feel we ought to be writing a poem, the moment is ripe for one, and all we come up with is bubkes (which is yiddish for beans) . muse o muse where art thou? i relate. -glen

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Loke Kok Yee 28 March 2018

Your limericks are always a hit With humor filled and so exquisite Simple lines that are full of glee And everyone seems to agree You are surely the favourite Thanks Valsa.

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Valsa George 28 March 2018

Loke, you are much more gifted than I am.... Your comments so beautifully rhyme They sound musical like wind chime You have a rare gift To pick words that rightly fit Astonishingly you do it in no time

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2018

This is the clever trick and very brilliantly penned. Revisiting this Limerick we get unlimited fun.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 March 2018

This is not a clever trick but i call it a wonderful trick! A beautiful LimericK! Thanks dear madam for sharing...10

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Mj Lemon 19 March 2018

The power of form to give inspiration! This is a terrific poem, Valsa. I have found myself having the thoughts and words inspired by the mere act of saying, Hey, I'll say it in the form of a..... The is one of your best, Valsa.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Astutely inscribed. This is the nice process to have a limerick. Well done madam.

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Indira Renganathan 19 March 2018

I do agree with you Valsa....thanks for the tip

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Bill Cantrell 19 March 2018

Ah, you do a wonderful job at limerick, in the first two lines you have placed the frustration that I continually find myself in, except you seem to master all facets of poerty, I always enjoy your heartfelt poems

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Mihaela Pirjol 19 March 2018

I very much enjoyed your limerick! I myself have a trick: counting syllables! :)

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Rini Shibu 19 March 2018

This is a clever write..good one, I shall try it

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