Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Limerick: Missing Readers Comments

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It seems no one is reading my stuff,
And I'm thinking I've had quite enough.
It will get better soon,
Or I'm off to the moon.
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Kim Barney
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Savita Tyagi 29 November 2016

Well you got me! I came to you site to read the poem posted on Bri' Nov showcase. Haven't even looked for it yet. (I will I will!) But the Limerick pulled me first. Yes it is not much fun when nobody reads you but you are better read than many of us. So stay around!

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Sister Frances 21 November 2016

You have a wonderful sense of humor...please stay, last time I checked there was no readers on the moon :)

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Valsa George 20 November 2016

Don't try to escape into the moon... Stay on the ground Kim.... There are more readers for your 'stuff' and we enjoy it too!

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Spock The Vegan 19 November 2016

Whoa! You are getting lots more readers than I am. I noticed you passed up Kelly Kurt, but I have been going backwards like mad. Good limerick.

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Wes Vogler 18 November 2016

I like to think they are being read but most people do not make comment. They have to be taught that our only reward is discussion about our work. I am wondering if I published my email inviting comment from non-members as well, how much trouble it might bring on. I am tempted to try it. I can always change the email if necessary.

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Paul Brookes 18 November 2016

Do not despair sometime it seems no ones out there then one person writes a post and your faiths restored a little like your post to me tonight so keep going A

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

Thanks, Paul, for the comment and the encouragement.

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Tom Billsborough 17 November 2016

I thought it was just me. Must say I've noticed a lack of activity recently. Hope you stay on site, Kim

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

Thanks, Tom, and thanks for all the other comments you have left on my other poems since you left this one. Very much obliged.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

Like a spoon in the hand at noon! ! No! Don't give up. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

Thank you, Edward. No, I won't give up. I just may take a little break for a while.

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Michael Spangenthal 17 November 2016

Hi Kim - Your poem is good and to the point, since you long for critique (as every poet with the right mind does and needs for artistic growth) you're advised to publish your poems online at Allpoetry.com as well, the largest poetry platform in the world and encouraging its poets to comment on each other, the feedback's quite frequent, sometimes excellent and in sum astonishingly rewarding; on a different note, write for yourself to handle the powerful emotions inundating your mind, heart and soul, to keep your level of insanity, don't write for the others since l'enfer c'est les autres, good luck–

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

Thank you, Michael, for your advice and words of encouragement. I think I looked at Allpoetry.com once and didn't think it was that user-friendly, but maybe that was a different poetry site altogether. I will have to give it another look.

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Douglas Scotney 16 November 2016

Issy and I make two, Kim. Suggest some I might like.

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

Suggest some you might like? Do you mean I should suggest some of my poems that you might like? If so, then my brother thinks 'Butterfly of Death' is my best poem. It's also one of my favorites. Some of my other favorites are 'The Storm', 'Rooftop Stronghold' and 'Limerick Series: The Terrified Taxi Driver'.

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James Mclain 16 November 2016

How can you tell, that no one is reading what you write. Their are very few here without massive ego's. And the few who say they don't well their just lying. True experience and confessional poetry to me, as with all the great one's in the past for them worked fine. Poem hunter work's the poet's up and down in the rankings to keep them here. Those few like me who've been here ten year's have learned to work to better what we write and nothing more.. The content of the poem definitely helps.. iip

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

How can I tell that no one is reading? Because every day I check the stats. I had one recent poem that was posted for four days before a single person read it. Other poems have met similar fates. It doesn't really matter. Thank you for the kind words of advice.

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Michael Spangenthal 19 November 2016

the number of comments seem to be a function of the platform one's publishing on, issuing 300 poems in the previous 6 months, I've received zero critique at Wattpad,2 critiques at Poemhunter, and 300 comments on Allpoetry, the latter encourages poets to deliver constructive critique on each other work, it has nothing to do with massive egos or literary quality and everything with the online environment you happen to be in... ergo you appreciate comments to spur literary growth spread your bets and don't just publish one one poetry platform

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