Thursday, October 8, 2020

Limerick- Miser (Sad) Comments

Rating: 4.8

In a village, lived a sworn miser
Earning more and more was his sole desire
Ate nothing, to save money
Soon he became so scrawny
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Valsa George
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Savita Tyagi 28 November 2020

This is humor at its best. Sadness of situation still leaves a smile thinking we all are responsible for the outcome brought upon by our actions.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 November 2020

greed to earn money makes mad the mind wherever goes life becomes unkind if we don't care about health all will be useless though wealth Health is wealth- as proverb that's why we find

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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2020

Wonderful Limerick............thank u, dear poetess......anjandev roy.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2020

A wonderful limerick with a great message. Middle course is the best course; neither misery, nor extravagance. Loved the comments of Susan Williams and Paul Brookes.

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Susan Williams 17 October 2020

When all a person finds attractive is money, they never lived until they died. They were the walking dead amid a grey and joyless country. Shiver! That is an awful waste of the gift of life. Top marks, Valsa!

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2020

i've sent you a message about the above. At least the miser had a toilet nearby, not that he'd need it for " poo" , as the guy needed one in your 4-year old poem: Limerick- 85. Embarrassment by Valsa George bri :)

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Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Money over life, it's very sad

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 October 2020

Sometimes in our desire to improve our life, we force ourselves to work beyond our capability yet only to end up more miserable. A wonderful limerick with a great message, reminding us that " Health is Wealth''. Brilliantly crafted and executed.

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Misers all over the world are alike, they do not want to spend for fear of exhausting the savings. They want to spend it in future. But without his knowledge his days will come to an end pathetically..*****

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Varsha M 09 October 2020

Very true message. Live life don't collect for future.

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Kostas Lagos 09 October 2020

Could be a truse story. I have met such people! Good one Valsa!

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 October 2020

Very interesting story. Perhaps he will take his money to other world after his death and spend there. Loved it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 October 2020

A well conveyed poem. Truly touching...5 stars*****

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Paul Brookes 09 October 2020

A sad tale no use ending up the richest corpse on the funeral pyre

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 09 October 2020

Limerick with a profound message enclosed. Thank you for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2020

If earnings are more and expenditure is too more then there is problem. In such condition a man cannot save money for future. If earnings are more and there is no saving, then the misery comes slowly and poverty is seen. An amazing Limerick is well versed. This gives fun but great lesson is to learn from this...5 stars..,

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