Limerick: Mike's Bike Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: Mike's Bike

Rating: 5.0


There was once a young fellow named Mike
who went out for a ride on his bike,
but his cycle broke down
on the outskirts of town,
so then Mike had no choice but to hike.

Limerick: Mike's Bike
Monday, July 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written 30 July 2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 31 July 2018

Mike's bike has broken down on the street grassy ground supplied him slipping greet songs and bonnie girl smile stroked his cutie pearl crippling waist ran with torn vest to creek //// nice limerick

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Tom Billsborough 31 July 2018

And then, no doubt, he fell in a. A sad story, made me sob! Very funny Limerick, Kim

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Wes Vogler 31 July 2018

not crazy about it but it is a start in the limerick direction

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Maryellen Smith 31 July 2018

A most uncharitable comment, and uncharacteristic of you, Wes. Although the subject may not be the most exciting, this limerick is flawless in construction. The rhyme and meter are both perfect! Nothing less than a ten!

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wes vogler 31 July 2018

You have to understand that we are good friends and razzing is almost necessary ta

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Bri Edwards 27 November 2019

To MyPoemList this poem will roll, like my bowling ball does when I bowl I'd make this verse longer, but " Hey" , ..... I've got much more do this fine day! ! bri :) the poem comments you left me today prompted my visit now.

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Elena Sandu 07 August 2018

oh dear, a mind that reads before the eyes can do, it seen climb instead of hike, and then my eyes, cried.. You are a brilliant poet, not easy to make a reader laugh and cry at the same time, wow. Thank you for sharing I surely enjoyed this read, thank you again!

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2018

This happened to me recently, so this made even a larger impression.

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Spock The Vegan 31 July 2018

You found my bike! I've been looking for that. Good Limerick, Kim.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 31 July 2018

whether or not, like he should've used nike if the day is bright he'll not lose sight Interesting Limerick. Thanks for sharing.

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