Friday, June 28, 2019

(limerick) Locusts Comments

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He's a farmer outstanding in his field
He is crying out standing in his field
They have brought down his ruin
He can hear them a-chewin'
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WES Vogler
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Kim Barney 29 June 2019

Too sad a subject for a limerick, Wes! (But I really like the clever rhyming of lines three and four!)

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wes vogler 29 June 2019

compliment accepted gratefully

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Kelly Kurt 28 June 2019

If you are out standing in a field, you could be hit by lightning. : -)

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wes vogler 28 June 2019

but can I get away with the repetition

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WES Vogler

WES Vogler

Vancouver BC Canada
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