Limerick- Last Ride Together Comments

Unfortunate fellow! A nice, message bearing Limerick 10+

The last line delivers a massive jolt. I remember an old campaign from years ago. It served an entirely different purpose....Speed Kills. The words apply here. A touching work, Valsa.

Limericks are not necessarily funny poems, it's sad and touching.

Beautiful Limerick with tragic end. Very true said over-speeding thrills but it kills.

whoa! valsa. before i read your note i thought, that ended with a thunk. i myself know of a death and people who have sustained serious injuries in motorcycle accidents. i've never wanted one and would have done all i could to prevent my sons riding them. imagine how vulnerable you are going at high speed and having a collision! -glen

How sad to see him end this way A mistake made; a life to pay Too late now for him to learn But for others; a lesson stern Big bikes and pride will bring dismay Thanks Valsa

Absolutely right! Often speed is the villain! Sorry for the tragic end to the story! This is a unique limerick with a social message! Thanks for sharing....10

Over speeding is common in the youths and when the girlfriend is with him he becomes more excited, I am sad but why all such happenings are associated with a woman.?

Hurry causes worry is right. This limerick bears tragic instead of frolic. A didactic poem amazingly shared.

The format of limerick is a cute and lovable one...it's quite nice that you've chosen to write unhappy subject too in this format....of course this limerick is touching

Valsa, such a poweful limerick....10+++++

This poem surely serves its purpose.Well written.