(limerick)intro To A Tom Swifty# 616 Comments

Nicely done. I have always have a thing for limerick

Just an afterthought. Shouldn't the last line end. Oh Jeez?

this is as funny as it gets! But not sadly for Tom with his Lock out. Sorry, can't match Mahtab's Limerick in reply! One of your best.

None here but Mom and Sis at Bingo I'm looking for burly king doe You are doll hound I'm not astound 'In life's game no fear' this is true! nice writing

Forgetting dern keys amazes mind. To help self there is fear. But joy is there in fun that will remove fear. An amazing fun giving Limerick is well penned...10

Bingo, indeed. You have hit the jackpot Wes.+++10