(limerick)intro To A Tom Swifty # 11 Poem by WES Vogler

(limerick)intro To A Tom Swifty # 11

Rating: 5.0


(limerick)Intro To A Tom Swifty # 11

Someday My Prints Will Come

Although some day my prints they may come
As of now, they have not, and I'm glum
Has the photo shop mailed
Or has postie just failed?
Check the lost-letter pool (jug-a-rum)

then said Tom... what a REVOLTING DEVELOPMENT

(limerick)intro To A Tom Swifty # 11
Tuesday, September 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 11 September 2018

Good punch line. As the photographer said to his girlfriend, 'Let us go into the darkroom and see what develops.'

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Kim Barney 12 September 2018

I think you are mostly correct on that. I think they read the limerick and kind of ignore the Tom Swifty, which they shouldn't do, because it is usually brilliant!

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wes vogler 12 September 2018

I get the feeling that no one takes the punchline to be the Tom Swifty Are we clear on this?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2018

A beautiful limerick with fun so nicely executed. Enjoyed. 10

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wes vogler 11 September 2018

All comments should be so gently executed thank you

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Vancouver BC Canada
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