Sunday, October 18, 2015

Limerick - Innocence -2 Comments

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To him someone said “One DAY we all will die”
Every soul will taste the death and no one can defy
Only our good or bad deeds will go
No one can make any alter to this flow
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 27 October 2015

Very good limerick, Asim

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Kelly Kurt 18 October 2015

He took things too literally.: -) Thanks, Mohammed

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Hazel Durham 18 October 2015

Great write, wise and a sense of innocence with wonderful lines!

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Loke Kok Yee 18 October 2015

when we die we leave everything behind. Thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 18 October 2015

Full of humour. Wonderful poem about simple philosophy of life and innocence. Great imagery. Thanks, M. Asim ji. A beautiful quote: Only our good or bad deeds will go / He was sacred during DAY but by night he slept like fly.

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