Friday, November 6, 2015

Limerick - Hot Dog Comments

Rating: 5.0

This dog is too hot for the bun
If I don’t hold it properly it will run
He is so cute to eat
Just checking his appearance with new meat
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sanjukta Nag 08 November 2015

The limerick is delicious like hot dog.10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

Wonderful hot dog in poem of imagery shared here that amazes mind really...10

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T Rajan Evol 06 November 2015

LOL, nicely thought poem on this subject, Asimji.

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 November 2015

Too good man, just laughing on it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 November 2015

Fantastic limerick. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

Where is the catsup? : -) Thanks, Mohammed

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Loke Kok Yee 06 November 2015

this limerick is beautifully done reading it gave me lots of fun thanks Asim-10++

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