Limerick- Godsend Comments

A Limerick that spells humour with rhythmic words. Superb Valsa! .....10

A very entertaining limerick. Yes, sometimes life is hard when you are fat as depicted in this humorous write. Beautifully crafted and cleverly written.

Fat people should not go near drains Their clumsiness will bring them pain If a crane was not near The drain will flood, I fear With the water blocked when it rains

Beautiful Limerick nicely drafted with a tinge of humour. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

That's a really humorous piece. Gave me a hearty laugh. Thanks for sharing.10

Someone, sometimes, somehow, An life is saved. Thank you mam.

Interesting write. Loved it.

Your limericks definitely boost readers' zest for life. Thank you.

Reply To Valsa George's Limerick Godsend Who advised her loving near the ditch, The fat woman forced him to flinch, The lean boy friend couldn't play, Left her alone and ran away, The bulky woman wasn't an experienced witch. (Traditional fun on the Holi day.)

She saw the crane godsend Or else she would have died in that drain! ... fantastic presentation. It is a beautiful limerick. Thanks for sharing... ..10